Showing posts with label Jamie Mathiesen. Show all posts
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Sunday, May 24, 2015

#9 (8.9): Flatline.

The TARDIS is a little smaller
on the outside than usual...












1 episode. Approx. 45 minutes. Written by: Jamie Mathiesen. Directed by: Douglas MacKinnon. Produced by: Nikki Wilson.


THE PLOT

An energy drain causes the TARDIS to materialize in Bristol instead of London - and to materialize significantly smaller than its usual size, to the point the Doctor and Clara have to struggle to successfully get out. The Doctor asks Clara to investigate the area, to see what might be causing this, while he goes back inside to try to stop the drain.

Clara encounters a community service crew cleaning up graffiti around a council estate. One of the men, Rigsy (Joivan Wade), tells her that several people have disappeared without a trace. He adds that, because this is a poverty-stricken area, the police have barely investigated. Clara returns to inform the Doctor - only to discover that the TARDIS has shrunk further, to practically the size of a toy model, with the Doctor now unable to get out.

He is able to pass her the sonic screwdriver and an earpiece, allowing him to use her as his eyes and ears. As Clara investigates the site of the most recent disappearance, using the Doctor's psychic paper to pass as "MI-5," a more frightening discovery is made: The disappearances are the work of two-dimensional creatures, who are able to transform people and objects into two dimensions simply by touch. But is this a prelude to an invasion; or, as the Doctore hopes, is it an attempt at communication gone horribly, tragically wrong?


CHARACTERS

The Doctor:
Knows the second he and Clara find the TARDIS much smaller than it should be that he has encountered something strange and new - Which is something he finds joy in. When he realizes the nature of the aliens, his first impulse is to try communicating, in case they don't realize that they're hurting humanity. It's only when that fails that he reverts to his usual role of "man who stops the monsters." By making the Doctor virtually powerless for the bulk of the story, it also brings home how forceful a presence Peter Capaldi can be when he comes back at the end to take full charge.

Clara: Thrust into the Doctor role for much of the story, trying to keep people alive. "Welcome to my world," the Doctor tells her acidly, as she uses a combination of bluffs, guesses, and a force of personality she doesn't fully feel to claim the leadership role of the group. Also like the Doctor, she has to push the group to keep moving and focusing on their own survival once some of her charges start dying.

Danny: Clara is lying to him, and her lying is even more obvious than it was before Danny met the Doctor. The Doctor knows about the lies; and Danny isn't an idiot, so he probably has a pretty good idea by the story's end - Which makes a confrontation pretty much inevitable.


THOUGHTS

This is Jamie Mathiesen's second Who script, coming right on the heels of his first. It's a very different episode than Mummy on the Orient Express: A little slower, a little moodier. The monster is unique and creepy, and the conceit of the Doctor stuck inside the miniaturized TARDIS creates some very funny moments.

All of which is to say: Jamie Mathiesen definitely needs to stay.

The first half is like the Series Two stinker Fear Her done right. There's a council estate setting, people who have disappeared with barely any investigation at all, and the Doctor and Clara (well, mainly just Clara) befriending a local in order to get more information. But with on-target guest performances and sharp dialogue, it has energy even before Clara and Rigsy find themselves running from the 2D monsters, whom the Doctor dubs "The Boneless."

The second half turns into a horror story, with Clara and the members of Rigsy's community service group fleeing for their lives - and mostly, not managing to move fast enough. As they flee into the train tunnels, the setting becomes claustrophobic and drenched in shadows. Then the Boneless evolves into "3-D," and the chase begins to resemble a scene from a zombie movie. It's atmospheric and effective. A good slice of horror Who.

It's also very funny. When the miniaturized TARDIS is stuck on train tracks with a train approaching, he sticks his full-sized hand out of the tiny box to escape ala "Thing" from The Addams Family. A little later on, Clara inverts Doctor Who's overused "heroic sacrifice" trope. Rigsy is all set to ride a train into the Boneless, so that he can buy time for the others while circumventing the "Dead Man's Switch." Until Clara points out that all that's needed is for her to wrap her headband around the controls. For the remainder of the episode, she needles him about trying to sacrifice his life for a headband.

The final Doctor/Clara scene is another terrific exchange, as the Doctor simultaneously congratulates and condemns her for being so good at being the Doctor... which entailed lying, giving false hope, and not looking back when people in her charge began to die. As he observes:

"You were an exceptional Doctor, Clara... Goodness had nothing to do with it."


Overall Rating: 8/10.


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Monday, May 18, 2015

#8 (8.8): Mummy on the Orient Express.

66 seconds: The countdown begins...











1 episode. Approx. 48 minutes. Written by: Jamie Mathiesen. Directed by: Paul Wilmshurst. Produced by: Peter Bennett.


THE PLOT

Having had a chance to calm down after the events on the moon, Clara has agreed to allow the Doctor to take her on one last trip. The Doctor chooses the Orient Express - not the classic train connecting Europe and the Middle East, but rather an exact replica - in space in the distant future, but decked out to look like the 1920's, complete with passengers in period costumes.

Their interactions are awkward. Clara doesn't quite know how to say goodbye (or if she really wants to), while the Doctor doesn't quite know how to ask her to stay. Fortunately, their impasse is broken by some good old-fashioned mayhem. The Foretold (Jamie Hill) is a mummy, a creature of legend that can only be seen by the victim it is about to claim. Once you see the Foretold, you have exactly 66 seconds to live.

The Foretold is on this train, picking off passengers and crew one by one. And the more the Doctor investigates, the more certain he becomes that this is all according to some unknown figure's design...


CHARACTERS

The Doctor:
We've seen all season how this Doctor avoids emotional reactions - turning away from Gretchen's self-sacrifice; being bewildered by a kiss of gratitude from a woman he saved; being first confused, then near-desperate to appease, in the face of Clara's rage. We see that again in the early scenes of this episode. He can't quite grasp what Clara's sad smile means, complaining that it's like two emotions at once - He just can't decode it. Later, when he decides there truly is a mystery to solve, he stands uneasily at her door, not certain whether to wake her up to join him or leave her to sleep.

As bad he is with emotion, that's how good he is with intellectual puzzles. Once all the scientists and experts on the train realize that The Foretold is very real and coming for them one by one, he is constantly in motion, using each 66-second opportunity to gather as much data as possible, then using the gaps in between to process it. When he finally defeats the monster, it's a breathtaking scene, superbly scripted and acted as the Doctor uses every precious second to gather the last shreds of data before acting.

Clara: I'm not in any way advocating for a return to the Doctor/Companion "almost-romance" of the previous season... But I will say that as much as I enjoyed Jenna Coleman in Series Seven, she has much stronger chemistry opposite Peter Capaldi than she did opposite Matt Smith. When she's taking his arm, half-listening half-sadly as he rattles on about dead planets, she feels more like she belongs there than she ever did with the Eleventh Doctor... And in the ending scene, when she looks at him and finally sees the hero again rather than the flawed man, the hunger in her face for more adventures is tangible.

Danny: Is on board with Clara taking one final trip with the Doctor, and tells her that "dumping him sounds a little 'Scorched Earth.' You still basically get on." She's evidently not convinced by his expressed willingness for her to travel with him, though, as she lies to both Danny and Doctor at the end; she doesn't tell Danny she's continuing to travel, and she lies to the Doctor that Danny is fine with it. This is a lie that will certainly come back to haunt her - Though I'm guessing not until the season's end.


THOUGHTS

That was terrific. The Doctor/Clara awkwardness does just enough to follow up on the emotional turmoil of Kill the Moon, while making sure to play up the fondness the two characters have for each other enough to make it believable that Clara changes her mind. Meanwhile, around the character material, we get a fast-paced episode that mixes Agatha Christie pastische, horror, and an element that's not only uniquely Doctor Who, but uniquely Peter Capaldi's Doctor Who. Enormous fun.

This was the first Doctor Who script by Being Human's Jamie Mathieson. On the strength of this installment, I hope it is the first of many. He captures the Doctor particularly well, characterizing him as brusque without being deliberately hurtful. There's a hint of compassion in his brutal honesty as he tells two different victims that he won't be able to save them, but needs them to tell him as much about the Foretold as possible so that he can "save the next one." Which he finally does achieve, in a dazzlingly well-executed climax. Equal credit is due to Paul Wimhurst, whose direction maximizes the energy throughout.

All that really keeps this from full marks is an ending that feels just a touch rushed, with the Doctor somehow getting everyone into his TARDIS despite us being told that his ship is inaccessible, and all of this happening offscreen to be filled in with dialogue after the fact. A couple dangling threads are also left, though I suspect that may be done deliberately to be followed up either in the season finale or the next season.

Those minor issues aside, I thought this was a fantastic bit of pure entertainment.


Overall Rating: 9/10.


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